Evett+Hawks

"Writing poems about poems is like rolling bales of hay in Texas. Nothing but the horizon to stop you."-Ruth stone

Ode to Love
"I love you "

Is three little words that anyone can say with out meaning it. When you Hold someone and you know you love them you feel it in that hug. You feel, As if that your heart will soar out of your chest.

you close your eyes into that hug. You see yourself floating among clouds with Icarus wings on your feet. You twist and turn, Floating until your eyes meet the sunset then you stop completely

You feel full .You open your eyes and you see the one who took you on that journey.

Your love.


 * Ghazal **

Like you used too

Your are selfish and nothing more you whine more more than you speak Nothing more

You yell your harsh words and never hold me like you used too Then you threaten me when i question this i am not used too

I remember when you'd hold me or hug me close and say you cared like you used too When father would say he loved me for who i am ,you never said that like you used too

You say i am nothing but a sick child that will never be normal, that i am not used too Why do you do things like this, Call me names, make me do things I'm not used too

You said you loved me You'd said you hold me close like you used too ! you said you'd never leave me or hurt me Like you used too

Father why'd you leave me with her you said you'd be there like you used too. Mother why do you put me down and treat me this way you said you love me like you use too.

Maybe if i was normal child you'd love like you used too Maybe if i didn't exist you'd wish loved me ,like you used too.

i wish i wasn't like this i want to be happy inside like i used too i want to smile and be happy to go home like i used too

You ask me why do i act this way, you want me to act like i used too i can't do that if you break my heart and put me down like you used too

Now at times i wish not too call my self by name like i used too Because it hurts when i hear it ,Cause that name doesn't sound right like it used too

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Commenting for my own poetry. I'm not really much of a poet and the way a poem is made up along with the rules is very hard for me. something would be off or if i'm trying to think up a rhyme. another thing is just i'm an editor for movies .Not words. if i was giving a paper and to fix it i would'nt find all the small mistakes only a few of them not much======